Thursday, April 9, 2015

What I'm grateful for 4.6.15: my six-year-old daughter's illustrated poem


backpack zipper
like shark teeth
champing
making it
open & close

[I love this poem so much. The poet meant for the word spelled as "champing" to be pronounced chomping.]

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4 comments:

  1. JennyApril 9, 2015 at 5:27 PM

    Beautiful! And how wonderful that poetry runs in your family.

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  2. UnknownApril 9, 2015 at 5:29 PM

    Already using a simile and onomatopoeia! Watch out!!

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  3. Jack SilbertApril 9, 2015 at 5:39 PM

    Brilliant! Bravo, young one!

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  4. Jack SilbertApril 9, 2015 at 5:41 PM

    p.s. The illustration looks like a combo backpack/shark!

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